Hallie brought home this writing assignment and it of course made me cry. I wanted to copy it down so we could post it for you.
Why did this happen? What am I going to do? How did it Happen?
I'd had a brother for about 6 months. He was born too early so he had to stay in the hospital. It had been very hard and difficult for the last few days and we were all worried for him. My sisters and I were in my room when out parents called us. They had been staying with him and I knew something was up. Our parents told us that Caleb had passed away and I did not like those words. I was almost angry.
Before they called I was playing and thinking, "I hope he is okay." We were all crying and my Grandma was comforting us, and I love her for that. I had kept on thinking he would get better because every time we walked into his hospital room he smiled bright and I kept on telling him that I loved him. I could not stand seeing him sad and I reminded myself that he had gone to a better place.
It was the end of his funeral when I started crying again but despite the crying I knew that I was going to get through this hard time. I now know that you never know how strong you are until being strong is your only choice.
By Hallie Fish
4th Grade Writing
Her teachers comments were:
Hallie- You are an amazingly strong person! I'm so proud or you! This is an awesome piece of writing and I love your truism at the end! Way to go!
We love you, bubba!
She is such a tender heart. Miss Hallie, you are beautiful inside and out.
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